I have made some changes from the comments previously.
Changes that I have made is the "titles" sections. Previously, there were comments that the titles doesn't make much sense. I decided to scraped the whole "try-to-make-sense" idea and just plainly display the title. I think it turn out well, even though there is no wow factor but at least it remove the confusing factor. Learning from my group project, I at in some shadow for my titles and also try to choose a background that is less distracting. However, for the background, I am not sure if I achieve what I intend. haha!
There were also comments that there are alot of panning up down on screen prints, thus the viewers are unable to focus on a particular point during those sections. I reduced the panning so that viewers can focus on some main points on the pictures. I also decided to let the panning action finish faster so that viewers can have more time to look at the pictures at the end of the panning before it transit to another picture.
I also changed my two sketches because previously there were comments that the scanned pictures are too grey and doesn't really fit into the whole video feel. I changed the pictures to one sketches which I managed to scan to have white background and also included a storyboarding.
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